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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Not one of my best, just something short that I wrote in History. I have way too much time in that class. Oh well. Let me know what you think.  THIS GIRL You can see her pain Written across her face Her world is crashing down After she finally build it up Now with all her hurt She can only see the ground But so much pride She'll keep going on And you will never see her frown - Cody - |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
"But so much pride She'll keep going on And you will never see her frown kinda sounds like sometimes...:-\ lol good job! haha maybe u wrote it about me lol just joking as you can tell i like it alot " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
this was a very good poem and if this isn't one of your best i can't wait to read one of your best. A Person Who Asks A Question Is A Fool For Five Minutes, A Person Who Doesn't Is A Fool Forever ... |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Good poem dude! Keep up the good shizal! James Dean ;) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Not bad. Short, simple, and made a lot of sense. Jenn "I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
hey. I really did enjoy reading this poem... it kinda sounds alot like my life. It was short, but it makes me think! Keep up the good work.... i'll continue reading your work. "Secret" |
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