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Teen Poetry #6

Love skiped me

lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2003-01-23 02:00 AM

Darkness leaded by darkness
To only one can see
Darkness takes love by the hand and guides it down this empty hall

Love is tought what is love and not beyond
So is this love what im feeling?
or is this my imagination

So does my heart lie to my mind or does love no exist
I can say I have been in love
And then I can say no I havent

Thinking about the times I have been hurt
Thinking about what I did so wrong
Thinking about why I just didnt belong?

I shared a kiss thinking i would have love
But instead in return i got the push and shuve

Me thinking one way him thinking the other
I am so frustrated my heart is ducked and covered

My heart doesnt want to risk beacuse look what its gained
I have cryed to many tears, look how much it rains

Do I want to open up? or let my fears consume?
Am I headed twords love, or is my love life doomed?

It seems like each time i try, it ends up me in tears
I just want to overcome this all, throw away my fears

It would be all so easy, so plain to see
If my heart was never broken, But that just can not be

My heart was ment to be broken
as well as these tears that i cryed
I come out being a better person, Well at least ive tryed.

leo_babe
Junior Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 13

1 posted 2003-01-23 03:31 AM

Thank you so much for writing this poem! It really touched me deeply...since I had such a bad breakup I'm really afraid of falling for someone and getting hurt again...besides....it's so hard to classify what love is anyway!

Jaime

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Posts 250

2 posted 2003-01-23 07:31 PM

I really love the title.. "Love Skipped Me". I'm not sure why. I just like it. It's quirky.

I like the poem as well... nice and open, honest. A story we all can feel.. nice job.

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

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