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Teen Poetry #6

Dylan On The Stereo

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2003-01-22 10:16 PM

There's something about nights with Dylan on the stereo,
And the way the street lights come on at 5 in the winter,
That makes me feel like I could live forever,
On winter skies that turn royal blue at sunset,
And the tree branches that look like shadows on the moon from my window.
There's something about seeing Christmas lights still up on on Martin Luther King Day,
And the way if you focus long enough you can almost see snow falling from clear skies,
That makes me feel like I couldn't take another day,
Of crushed hopes for snowstorms,
And the way everything that surrounds me is dead.
So I'll stay inside with Dylan on the stereo,
And wait for spring.

The ending was kinda weak because I was going good but then my creative flow was just cut off. Soo..It could've been better.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-01-22 10:29 PM

I was so much older then.
I'm younger than that now.

smile?

The title grabbed my eye and the poem warmed my heart...thanks. I needed that.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-22 11:28 PM

This really was a good poem, it was soft and had alot feeling in it. I liked this one alot!
Enjoyed.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Jaime

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Posts 250

3 posted 2003-01-23 07:45 PM

I actually really liked it.. I'm not sure why... maybe because I could see this. It's just real.

Thanks.

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

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