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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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blue crystals shine in the heavenly sky cascading along with the suns briliant rays touch me now your hands so gentle and soft washing along the curves of my face yet pulling down on my body holding me there is the love and force that makes us one shunning wistful calculations of x plus y instead getting lost in the depths of your eyes where i shouldnt be i have been a thousands times playing the game with excellent agility i shall not lose to anything except you your soul shall over power my small figurine yea wrapping around me like a sensule hug are the steely blue eyes that i adore flashing a quick smile with a flirtatious kick laugh now with your perfect case never a flaw to be found if i should turn an angel i would make every dream and wish come true yet souly this shall never happen i am half only human just a single hearted girl asking you to love me to ~*Theres a sparkle in your eye that only i see, and theres a place in your heart where only i wanna be*~ |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
this is a beautiful poem. it is wonderfully written. this expressed a lot of emotion. i really liked it..good job.  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I love the description here, Riley. The way you wrote of the bodies and the physical interactions between you and the other in the poem really gave me a strong visual. Well done. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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