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Ree Ree Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56providence, RI |
She just appears by the sea but she can't see me not yet anyways. The unicorn, rainbow hair, sparkling coat-> Beautiful and she's happy. So they shoot, through the stars through the clouds white as cotton or grey like smoke after a campfire put out, no so long ago. But still reconcilable, still burning, however weak. In the stars she finds him- smart boy, loving boy -> good boy. In the clouds she finds her friends and they have fun. Real fun. This isn't instant gratification people! This is full frontal happiness. These people, this place, this moment, no matter about tomorrow or yesterday, this is her paradise, Here they give eachother everything = happiness = everything. And the evil dragon red and frightening glaring down upon them will cause them no alarm they just laugh and he is Gone. Over taken by their happiness. he/his symbol/ sadness, pain or despair can not live here amongst the clouds. And i am there to watch it all. and now she sees, because i am her and she is me. She's just me older understand that everything = happiness = everything or maybe me younger understanding that everything = happiness = everything or maybe.... not me at all. |
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Jaime
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I feel like I'm insulting your time here, but I really don't know what else to say except that I really like it... I just do. It feels very genuine and it's different from I've been reading all night so it's very refreshing. Thanks for posting this. - Jaime Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe. [This message has been edited by Jaime (01-23-2003 10:32 PM).] |
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