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Teen Poetry #6

Pain In My Eyes

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-21 09:09 PM

*I want to say this...I was not sexually abused or physically abused, just emotional crap since I was a youngin'....*

Look into my eyes
Deeper then you ever have
See the pain, see the tears.

This is what you caused me
Horrific memories from when I was young.
I hated you, but you are my father I must love you

Stop the tortue
No more pain
I can't take it anymore.

Look at me damit
Look at what you've done
Look, look, look

Stare, feel what I feel.
Feel the hatred that penetrates from me to the air
Hear what I'm saying-

I hate you, but I must love you.
You are my father
Hear me, stop it.

Don't look away
Look deeper, look at the pain in my eyes.
Look at me, feel ashamed.

You bastard.

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

leo_babe
Junior Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 13

1 posted 2003-01-22 05:19 PM

That's really deep...it's a good poem...it's very expressive

jennilynn
Junior Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 29
here with me

2 posted 2003-01-22 05:50 PM

holy...this is my life in a poem...i can definetly feel the emotions here. I'm at a loss for words. anyway good job here.

-jen-

love is life

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2003-01-22 06:53 PM

Oh Kirah... I liked the poem, but... I.. well, I just wish things could be better between you and your father. Are you okay? What happened? Well, I guess I'll talk to you about it sometime...

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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