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Teen Poetry #6

Look what you've done

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-01-21 06:21 PM

Not once
have I been able to count on you.
Not once
have you apologized and meant it.

You let me down
time after time
it seems this is frequent

Maybe your so blind
that you can't see my tears.
The tears that turn to ice
because of what you've done.

You expect me to open up to you
like a daughter should
but how can I
when you've destroyed so much of me.

Sometimes I wish I could run
run so far away
but I can't leave him behind
LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE
you make me think
my life isn't worth it anymore
You ask for what? forgiveness?!
HOW DARE YOU!

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2003-01-21 06:52 PM

I liked this poem very much.
It was sad, thats probably why I loved it so much. Yes...How dare they!
Great piece. Hope to be seeing more from ya!

~*Bruises fade father, but the pain remains the same, I still remember how you kept me so afraid, Strength is my mother for all the love she gave*~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-21 07:44 PM

Great poem, I could really feel the emotions, your anger and hurt was pouring through the computer screen at me. Doesn't it just help so much to vent like that?
And what's with the whole teenage mother daughter thing? My mom is soo...but I won't go into that, Im sure you know what I mean.
Great Poem!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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