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Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2003-01-20 07:44 PM

Let Me Be The One….

Let me be the one to hold you,
When tears fill your eyes.
Let me be the one to tell you the truth,
When you are surrounded by lies.

Let me be the one to miss you,
When we are apart.
Let me be the one to love you,
With all my heart.
Let me be the one to show you the true meaning of love,
To death causes us to become apart.

Let me be the one that shows you,
What it is that you do to me?
Let me be the one to bring you,
On a magic carpet ride over the graceful blue sea.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-01-21 01:33 AM

I like this one. Alot. This was really a great imaginative poem.
Wow, that's all I can say right now till my brain stops reeling from the onslaught of such wonderful words put together in such a wonderful way.
How was THAT to show how much I liked this??!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

2 posted 2003-01-21 09:21 AM

This poem is absolutely wonderful! I wish some guy liked me that much. You have a such a great way with expressing yourself. Another beautiful poem! WOW!!!! Oh and did I mention that I absolutely love this poem? LOVE it!!!

-Jeanette-

[This message has been edited by PrincessNets (01-21-2003 09:22 AM).]

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

3 posted 2003-01-21 04:57 PM

Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments so far. It makes me feel so great that people really love and enjoy my works. Thanks again look forward to reading more of them.

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

4 posted 2003-01-21 09:48 PM

wow hun this is beautiful. i can tell that you meant it for a very special person or if not for a certain someone its just your heart reaching out. it is wonderful and i always love reading your work. keep it up!

Victoria7
Junior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 21

5 posted 2003-02-07 11:04 AM

Loved it!!!!!!!!!

sweetgirl052003
New Member

since 2003-02-03

Posts 4
US,Texas

6 posted 2003-02-07 09:37 PM

NICE, GREAT POEM, I LOVED IT!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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