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Danielle
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0 posted 2003-01-20 12:15 PM




I can't look at your pictures
It hurts to see your face
I can't go through the things I took back
Old memories play on my mind
I can't look at my buddylist
'Cause I know you blocked my name
I can't listen to certin songs
Because tears run down my face
I can't stand to see green mini vans
They send chills throughtout my being
I can't go through Pawtucket
It hurts to see places we've walked
I can't watch cartoons
Visions of you make me sad
I can't watch other play video games
All I see is you sitting with your controler
I can't stand to think of you
Because I know it's really over

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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smurf_gurl
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since 2003-01-20
Posts 19
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1 posted 2003-01-20 07:45 PM


There, there dear. It'll all be okay. You'll find you'll move on in time, and all of these things won't bother you so much. Take care, hope you feel better!
-Stace

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2 posted 2003-02-19 11:23 PM


A very good vent.... or ramble.... or cry....

whatever it should be called, I'm glad you were able to write it. Poetry is a good release.

I hope things improve for you, Danielle.

~Titus

"On the plains of Hesitation lie the blackend bones of countless millions, who, at the verge of victory, sat down to wait, and waiting - died."

  

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