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Stars at night |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York 
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Bright, twinkling, small things way up high. Shining brightly in the velvet sky. Black sky, you shine through. Little specs so far away. come close so I can reach. Hold you tightly in my arms. Fly high, dont burn out. You're a candle in the sky. You stay lit for years Hide behind clouds when you're afraid. I stand outside on a summers beach. Come out don't be scared. It's just the rain. Shine brightly, never leave the nightle sky. ******************** If two people don't like this one, I'm takin' it down...I don't think I like it much either. I was bored and started writing in math again...My bad. *Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.* ~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~ [This message has been edited by Acies (02-06-2003 01:00 PM).] |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I thought it was cute, tho I'm sure it was not your best. Keep working on it. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
a candle in the sky beautiful line, i loved it keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Not too bad, pretty actually. Keep working on it, it can only get better. Jenn "Mama, I found someone, like you said would come along I was afraid to let him in, cause I'm not the trusting kind but now I'm convinced he's heaven s |
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