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Teen Poetry #6

Still working on a title

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

0 posted 2003-01-14 07:13 PM

Wishing wonders
in an endless stream.
Blue turned to purple
through kaliedoscope-magic air.

Falling fountains
in a free-for-all daze.
Trimmed persona filled water
slides by in a sleeping state.

Mystical aura mountains
peak as sky's the limit.
A weeping-souled tree
hangs in perfect alliance with its god.

Restrained and hidden soul
observes endless dreamy scenes.
My gentle stunned heart
surrounded in a glorious view.

I know it needs some work...I'm just not sure what to do or where to start.
Thanks for reading!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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