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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
he cried today, but it didnt take the pain away it will take some time he said, repeating it over and over in his head i hate her i thought, look at all the pain she's brought but does she really care? of the love for her that still lingers there he'll be there for me, for when i'm not happy open up the door please there's some pain you need to releave what was it you heard me say? i dont know, i'm quite confused today i dont want you to go my feelings i will finally show please dont cry anymore and open up the door "sometimes i just feel like |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Aww Sam this is so sad. You have really grown as a writer and I think you will be the bestest ever man!!!! LOL PLUMBER!!!!! *Allison* "O My love |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Bien Bien! You've captured a break up perfectly whether it be between good friends or a boy friend girlfriend deal. Keep on writing I'll be a-keepin' my eye on ye!!!!! |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
ahhh sam be careful of the plumber!!!hes trying to take ur poetry man!! this was kewlish sam (and that dont mean that i dont like it as u like to say) it was good but i still like spinal dose (if that was the name heh heh)good job man!happy B-day orlando bloom!! "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
AWESOME!!!!!!!! O I already replied to this. O well it deserves TONS of replies.!!!!!!  "O My love |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
So I hear Orlando`s B-day was memorable for ypu too!!!  "O My love |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
 man this is awesome!!!! look at it man!"O My love |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, thx to every1 for replyin!! geez allison, how many times were u plannin on replyin?!? thx again tho, it means alot!! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL @ Allison...I think she likes it.  Samantha~ I have to say that I like this too...very much. You did an excellent job of conveying the emotions in this piece and, as Allison said, you are really growing as a writer, and it shows. Keep up the great work. Beautifully penned. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-18-2003 05:25 PM).] |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Like I said..This gal gets better and better every time! Ask Orlando!!! LMAO!!!! GO SAM GO SAM GO GO GO SAM!!!! You know what that reminds me of? "Steve Urkle goin Purkle! Steve Purkle goin Urkle!!!" lol *Allison* "O My love |
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Krystin18 Junior Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 20Ontario, Canada |
mmmm... it confused me at first lol but i like |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, omg allison!!! lol that reminded me of... "Jenna Jenna!~! lol thx to every1 for replyin!! "sometimes i just feel like |
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