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Forget Me Not
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Forget Me Not |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You never believed me I'm slowly dying I'll make sure I send you a.. Forget me not! I think you need this, maybe you need this.. It won't be long now my tears fall like rain (like rain) Please don't lose my Forget me not! I think you need this, maybe you need this. I'm writing you to let you know you meant everything (everything) But now i'm gone away from the damage (damage) Forget me not! I think you need this, maybe you need this...oh yeah.. Maybe...you need this... If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
Was this intended as song lyrics? It makes great lyrics, and would make a good poem too. I'm presuming that was to point of some of the repetition. Or maybe artistic lisence? Ellie  "I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma" |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
yeah it was intended to be song lyrics, i'm not sure if i'm done with it yet though..thank you for the reply though, i'm glad you liked this piece.  If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow! VERY great poem/lyrics! I really really liked this, the whole forget me not thing was VERY good, I like the way you did that. WinterWren |
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