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Thoughts On Life |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Thoughts they travel afar, to places beyond the skies, And Places deep down inside, To dreams The dreams I hold inside Wishing… Wishing that life was happy and long Instand of the path to what I belong The path of the hurt and wounded The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt The dreams tell my tales Tales of love I wish belonged to me Tales of things I wish I could become Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands Like seeds it drains away thought the gaps Slowly losing that what I once held Hoping it would land in the emptiness inside And grow into the paths of tomorrow So many paths inside tangled in the web of life As the paths ive walked fade from sight Another’s grow in the places I have yet to tread Spreading out on paths of future life’s to be told My thoughts travel back to my mind Telling me I have yet to find The answers to the questions of life But one thing I know… The paths I walk lead to my own little doom. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ This is quite lovely~ You're very talented ... and it's so nice to have you here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You are so right -- all the way down this well written poem. Take heart when it's rough ... my three dearest friends have each led lives that from my viewpoint seem to consist mainly of disappointment, pain and sorrow....yet each has been able to climb through it and into the sunlight. One even got rich in the process, retired at 44...He lives in constant pain, but he's happy. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is indeed lovely, Thanks for sharing  Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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