Teen Poetry #6 |
Escape |
*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Willow leaves fan an aqua sky A dove trills softly Elicting a peaceful sigh Peering up through the branches To see the brilliant sun Showing off it's awsome beauty And keeping the watcher stunned The wind caresses in a gently sloping roll Leaving the body refreashed And cleansing a troubled soul Beauty and Majesty walk hads entwined Rest for the weary eyes And vacation for the mind A soft blanket of grass Rests the tired feet The light wisp of jasemine Keeps the air smelling sweet A place were time has no meaning A place the world forgot Where dreams become reality and expressions coherent thought A place were nature reigns and where a lost spirit May find comfort and solace And be relived of all pain When I was driving home from work today after school I saw a woman holding a baby in her arms she was crying and so was the baby, and the woman was actually no woman at all she looked about 17. Down the road further I saw a beggar out on the street and he didn't have a coat on, I don't know about other places but here in Washington it's cold this time of year. I got home and was slightly depressed so I wrote of the place I wished I could be at that moment and it came out like this, It does sound kinda nice though, doesn't it?? Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Wow that poem is sooo good! I wish I was there instead of here, for sure! You can write very well! I loved it! Keep up the good work! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
That poem was very good. I wish that I could be in that place too. It sounds like a beautiful place. Great poem! -Jeanette- |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
This poem was REAL good...i liked it alot...keep up the good work...you have a lot of talent!! <3 ya! LIZ live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
excellent write, i'd like to go to that place too, keep up the good work. |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
nice poem, although i enjoyed your earlier works more. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Thanks guys! I've been in kind of in a weird mood lately I'm not writing about the stuff I normally write about but I like them anyways! But thanks for all your comments! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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