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Teen Poetry #6

Stains of Time

LesterVisaya
Junior Member

since 2002-11-16

Posts 21

0 posted 2003-01-02 09:17 AM

The sky has always been too high for me
Hell is too far away from my heart
To be human and whole is to taste the tears of God
I’ve chased the high curves of time
I’ll continue to shape this grief
until I find what I’m running away from

I get tempered of soft wishes
I’ve cursed the souring fears
never giving it a chance to spit out
I found the freedom that must be locked
The worth of all bearing fruits from it
gladly darkens the shadows I must walk with…

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2003-01-02 09:54 AM

that is REALLY good. The expression and the voice is clear. Great write!

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-02 01:17 PM

You are very talented! This was a very good poem! Wonderful write, well done!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

LesterVisaya
Junior Member

since 2002-11-16

Posts 21

3 posted 2003-01-03 03:07 AM

You are talented yourself..

Thanks for both of your replies,really appreciate them..

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