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Teen Poetry #6

To Whom It May Concern

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2003-01-02 02:36 AM

To whom it may concern,
If it pesters anyone at all,
I would like my land to be,
The plot beneath the hill,
Where north I face the noon,
In silence and in shade,
Where east I see the moon,
In stormy horizon gloom,
I would like my song to be,
Sung below the rain,
I would like to be mourned,
In grief and in pain,
But dreams of the dead,
Seldom ever come.

So south I face,
In full on sun,
I can see no moon,
For I am set to rest.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

1 posted 2003-01-02 10:39 AM

WOW! I am amazed. That was a great poem. Thank you for sharing! Hope to read some more from you soon!

-Jeanette-

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-02 01:08 PM

You really are very good. This poem was no exception I enjoyed it alot. "I would like my song to be, Sung beneath the rain." I liked that line lots.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

3 posted 2003-01-02 03:59 PM

yeah, what they said ^^^^^^^^

-Stinky Twinkie-

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