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LTEvans Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72Lenham, England |
She wore… She wore a look of spring, Her flock beneath her arms, Child bright as wildfire, As young as you or me. So, go dancing down below her. She wore a love of summer, My love beneath her arms Velvet, sparse and worn, And time all running bare. So, go lying down below her. She wore a fear of autumn, Her flock all fallen down, Tears are turned to ice, And she is lonely too. So, go drifting down below her. She wore a dress of winter, Her clothes draped on her arm, Rags as bright as banners, As white as a dawning day. So, go walking down below her. Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian. |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
I love your writing. I read some of the stuff that for some reason has a little lock thingy on it, but I love all that you've written. You use some strange stuff but I think its cool. Nice work LTEvans... nice indeed. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
This was really good. It was a very different style and subject and I found it very interesting. I like your stuff. *Allison* "O My love |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Well. I'm not sure I really fully understand this poem. But. I liked how it was written. Very nice. Keep it up. |
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LTEvans Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72Lenham, England |
Thanx for the praise! Think trees |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
*gasp* wow! That was REALLY really good, no it was great! Are you sure you belong in the teen room? You really have alot of talent! I just loved that one! WinterWren |
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