Teen Poetry #6 |
The Year It Finally Snowed On Christmas Eve |
StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Can we go dancing on my roof tonight? I could watch the snow get caught in your eyelashes, Maybe the stars would shine a little brighter for us, So I could be sure not to step on your feet. I know I'm not all that graceful, But I hope it's good enough for you, I hope I'm good enough for you. |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
that is so pretty, romantic, and slightly humerous all at the same time. I like it alot! |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
I really enjoyed this.. more of my poems at-> thehayden.org lets-make-love-&-not-war. |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
omg i love that its so cute and well written... wow that was short but sweet nice job!!! |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
OMG! This was great! So sweet and flowing. I loved it! Great job! Keep it up! |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Thanks. |
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