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Teen Poetry #6

Bad Boy Style

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

0 posted 2002-12-18 10:58 PM

You got a bad boy style,
which is the reason u got me stayin around awhile
You make me laugh,
but most of the time u make me cry
sometimes the things u say to me makes me wanna die
I know u dont mean the things u say
and thats why I stay
I know deep down u care
but to show feelings you would never dare
You gotta keep ur bad boy style
but i want u to no its okay to care once in a while

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2002-12-18 11:01 PM

bad boys are hard to resist eh? I liked it alot....and using U instead of you is a big plus in my eyes...brings out the actual feelin of a teenager...good job

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2002-12-22 02:01 PM

hey,
this was really good.
i liked it
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

3 posted 2002-12-22 02:24 PM

Hah I love bad boys too... loved this starting with the title. I must admit your writing rocks my socks!

[This message has been edited by OtherSideOfTheMirror (12-22-2002 02:26 PM).]

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-12-22 04:35 PM

I liked this..And I love the bad boys...W0o0o0o0o0o...Ok srry I had a girl moment there...LOL
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

5 posted 2002-12-22 05:37 PM

Ya well, I hate bad boyz, seeing as how I'm the good boy being overlooked for them. Bah.

Nice write though.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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