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rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-18 10:43 AM

You came to be a friend
when he was mine forever.
You were there in many memories.
You were fake? I thought never.

Then I came to find
you'd do anything for sex.
I was amazed at this fact,
but even more cause you were his ex.

Through different sources, I found,
you hurt him bad before,
lied to his face and cheated,
but he is coming back for more.

Don't pretend to be my friend
when honesty is what you lack.
You may not believe, but it's true.
He sees you there, he wants you back.

You always held a knife
right behind your back,
when the time came,
you gave my heart a whack.

Your mom even lied
so your cover wouldn't blow.
I came to you first.
I had the right to know.

Do you want him now?
now that he left me.
Or you wanted him before,
that I now see.

You may think it is his fault
and this may be true,
but I was over him,
you were a friend I thought I knew.

What you need to know
is honesty I believe in
and trust is needed too
especially in a friend.

With that now said
you know where you stand.
Don't you now realize?
I'll never lend you a hand!!!

RxyFxy04

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

1 posted 2002-12-18 11:05 AM

I know how you feel honey, I had some one do somethin like that to me. Really sucks when they do things like that don't it? Very good write. The emotion in this one really comes out.

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

2 posted 2002-12-18 03:48 PM

awwww not a good friend, not a goood friend AT ALL! this poem was realllly good!
i reallllly liked these lines
Your mom even lied
so your cover wouldn't blow.
I came to you first.
I had the right to know.

not a good mom either!! lol
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

3 posted 2002-12-18 04:58 PM

Unlike the person you are talking to, this poem is great!

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

4 posted 2002-12-19 10:02 AM

hey gurl!! you already know that i LOVE this poem...and that i LOVE your poetry in general...just wanted to say keep up the good work!! LUV YA!!
LIZ

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

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