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rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-12-17 04:20 PM

      /*~*~Cold\         /freezing~*~*\
     Try not      to cry,        Icicle
      tears       \fill/       my eyes
        please               night
            turn          into
                    day


      ~*~and melt his cold heart away~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

1 posted 2002-12-17 04:22 PM

lol sry guys i got bored.. (its supposed to look like a heart.. use your imagination :-) )
but if you cant read wat it says its
"Cold freezing
Try not to cry
Icicle tears
Fill my eyes
Please nite turn into day
Melt his cold heart away"
~*~e~*~

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-17 07:09 PM

What an awesome new forum! I love when people set up their poems totally unique! This was very beautiful! Plus...I LOVE ICICLES!
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2002-12-17 10:14 PM

Very creative Emily! I really loved it!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

4 posted 2002-12-17 10:50 PM

::claps:: very creative, nicely done. I loved it.

shea

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2002-12-17 11:20 PM

Short but sweet, I really like that poem, and yes I could read it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-12-21 05:13 AM

Emily~
I love it...both the words and the format.
Great job on this and I'd say it actually
meets the current challenge too.
Awesome job!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-21-2002 05:14 AM).]

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

7 posted 2002-12-21 03:27 PM

Aw that's really cute. I like the heart idea it was probably just hard to type. Very nicely done.

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