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LTEvans Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72Lenham, England |
Repetition Repetition, It gets on your nerves, Get a job, Get a job, Get a job, Get a job. Well, let me tell you; I’ve got a job, And that’s pissing you off. So shut up and give me your cash. Repetition, Does not go very far. Sort yourself out, Sort yourself out, Sort yourself out, Sort yourself out, Well, let me say now: I’ve sorted myself. In alphabetical order, A through to Z. So shut up and give me your cash. Repetition does no one any good, If I don’t listen once, Then I wont listen twice, So tell me right now, What is the point in telling me thrice? Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian. LTEvans |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow. Good stuff here. I hate it when people tell me things over and over like by hearing it a hundred times I'll actually do it..Heh. No, I'll just get annoyed and listen to you even less. Ha! Anyways. Great poem. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
 "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
hmm. Very interesting. I HATE REPETITION TOO!!!!!!!!!! ugh. anyways... It's very specific to one topic, one problem, which is fine, but you might write another one that's just as powerful but more broad... so everyone can relate to it... but since I personally relate to this one, GOOD JOB! I like the listing because you still kept a good flow with the rest of the poem. good job! -othersideofthemirror |
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