Teen Poetry #6 |
Im Not Scared....(title suggestions?) |
xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
--This may not make sence to some people b.c its hard to understand..so take wut u can and tell me wut u think thanks..--- The feel of your hands caressing my body and the soft wispers of nothingness running slowly threw my ears like music While your soft eyes look into mine with the gentalness of the sun Your arms are where my journey begins traveling where I dont no where I am but Knowing Im glad Im their Im new to this land but somehow I find security and im safe I find myself gazing into your eyes which tell their own stories longer than before and i softly kiss your sweet lips that taste so good beginning to feel myself fall but im not scared I take your hand which seems to hold the world, in my hand which holds my soul look into your cocoa eyes one last time before the nite is threw and kiss you goodnite tellin you i will dream of you I walk away and think to myself This journey will be long but as long as I find security and gentalness even If I dont know exactly where Im goin I know Ill be okay I lie my head which is filled with thoughs hard to verbalize close my eyes which tell a million stories and do what I said I would do and meet him in my dreams.... |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
heyy this is REALLY good! maybe a title: Secure. But I'm so sure because you said he was in your dreams.. lol i dunno but GOOD poem!! |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
VERY GOOD WRITE I like it and I wish I could think of a name but all of mine are corny lol Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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