Teen Poetry #6 |
rainy days and cold nights |
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Rainy days and cold nights fill my life The rain pours with out mercy You can't see through rain The rain gets to you, makes your tears flow smoothly It pierces your skin Only cover can save me My cover faded, tattered at torn I look up, longing to see the sun shine The sun doesn't shine, no clouds break My day is overcast, my nights freezing Rainy days and cold nights fill my life Its so cold when their is no one to share it with You lay alone, wondering what happened You shiver, no arms wrap around you come and gone many people but now I am tattered and torn in the corner, shaking over and over the cold seeps to my bones no warmth finds its way to me rainy days and cold night fill my life *this isn't the best ever but its cold and raining here, its gets depressing after awhile* " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I know what you mean in this one. I love how you gave me a great picture while I was reading this..Good one! Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Probably not one of my favorites from you, but it was still well written. The imagery you use in your poems is awesome. lol Malloree, it might be raining all the time the last couple days, but we've gotten a whole 19/100's of an inch. Anyway, good write and thanks for sharing. - Cody - |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
I loved your poem!! "Quote" ~> You lay alone, wondering what happened You shiver, no arms wrap around you :-( i kno how ya feel! Keeep on writing! ~>eMiLy<~ |
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