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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-12-13 07:08 AM

"Little Miss Super Star"
(11/12/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Intro
Don't know how ya'll feel 'bout Britney
But, this is my version, so...Listen closely!!!

Verse 1
Spottet her a couple a times,
In magazines, on MTV.
And she's always blowing my mind,
Cherry red lips and swaying hips.
'Course my fantasy takes it further,
A make-out scene, know what I mean?
Well, all da fellas know for sure,
She's got it all, she's got it all...

Refrain
Little Miss Super Star
Miss - how I wantcha.
The perfect sized package
Nothing sold sep'ratly,
Nothing more, nothing less
Everything you have's me.
Little Miss Super Star
Miss - How I wantcha.

Verse 2
A moment alone would do it,
A taste of this stuff, clothes would fly off.
But reality doesn't fit,
With what's in here, it's all so wierd.
Have eyes that can make the stars cry,
Wanna swim in 'em, just a moment.
A voice that make angels fall each night,
She's a gift from him, a gift from him...

Refrain

Bridge
Everyone say's little naughty girl.
But the tight skirts, just shows the woman wants out.
It's no riddle she's a hottie, girl.
So drop the dirt, there's nothing to talk about.
'Cause this is what she is, and all she is....
She's top of the food-chain...

Refrain

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2002-12-13 09:32 AM

I thought this one was okay, not particularly my realm of interest, though. This is a very hormonally driven piece, you did good at expressing your want of this "star". Guess I'm just not one for being superficial. *shruggles*

This piece brings a question to my mind. Since when does wearing tight skirts mean that a female is a woman?

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

2 posted 2002-12-14 01:33 PM

sorry, there is a first for everyhting...this is the first poem on this site I don't really like..sorry

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

3 posted 2002-12-14 02:28 PM

Yea, shes hot all right. Hot enough for a moment only. I don't really want to swim in her eyes, just look at her. Thanks for expressing your opinion though! That's what really counts; not what we think.

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2002-12-14 05:38 PM

what's wrong with everyone? this is the same type of song most people are liking these days. it's about sex, just like everything else these days. so what if it is hormonal? this is a teen forum, what teen doesn't have overly active hormones right now eh?

and im not saying thats a bad thing Brian. ^^ i happened to like this. it's different from the other styles ive read from you and i enjoyed the new look into you. i especially liked this part:

quote:
Little Miss Super Star
Miss - how I wantcha.
The perfect sized package
Nothing sold sep'ratly,
Nothing more, nothing less
Everything you have's me.
Little Miss Super Star
Miss - How I wantcha.

that doesn't have to go for just Britney. it can be any woman out there.
nice write brian, keep it up. ^^

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-12-14 06:19 PM

Yea..I`m sorry but I dont like Britney Spears much...I`m not jealous but its just the fact that those teen idols are pretty enough. They have beautiful voices and they dont need to wear..or not wear skimpy clothing..You know..and also just cause a girl is beautiful doesn`t mean she has it all..she could be dumb as a doornail..LOL No offence to anyone that likes her..I`m not sayin she is but for all we know she could be a pre madonna b****..LOL But your poem was beautiful and i agree..it could be for any woman..if someone wrote me that poem I would cry...Good work
*Allison*

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

6 posted 2002-12-14 07:23 PM

no one really does like britney.

they like the merchandise and the image.

good write.

/jen/

'i don't care if it hurts, i want to have control. i want a perfect body, i want a perfect soul.' [radiohead]

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