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Teen Poetry #6

order without restraint

John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

0 posted 2002-12-11 08:38 PM

Law provides their mold
To put reason to a soul we’ve sold
But we do not care about freedom
Nothings fairer but than to be them
The negative reinforcement we call science
To draw fault to resistance, we call that defiance
I’m mapping out this life
They told me how but now I’m in the strife
Of dissension and confusion
Not worth mention and not worth diffusion
I’m at a stage of what they call teenage
I’m at an age to shut away all rage
By writing a page but I’m labeled immature
I’m spotlighting an age of a disabled allure
Caused by the divide of human spirit
Paused by a tied love and lack thereof wit, it’s
So naïve in all their thought
Striving for what ideal I've already caught
Don't give up on instinct, question all told and taught.

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-12-11 08:51 PM

hey,
this poem was realllly good!
keep on postin
cant wait to read another
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

2 posted 2002-12-11 08:53 PM

this was really good!It explained how u felt!r u pro or something???

good job tho

###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

3 posted 2002-12-11 09:24 PM

Definitely a look into the psyche of an average teen. Good work

~Bryan

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-12-12 09:11 PM

thank you.

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