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making amends |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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this poem...you dont have to reply to....im just writing it to explain why im going to do what im planning to do. MAKING AMENDS so this is the bottom line that's okay I'm not sad well maybe I am I have to make amends i guess i should before i set the ball rolling I'm sorry for everything I don't want to feel sorry after i write this or guilty i think i should feel relieved and able to move on to what's next Life isnt difficult its living that kills us everytime i dont remember whether i wrote it or someone else unfortunatly this isnt very poetic none of my work really has been people would call this a cry for help my voice is already hoarse I cared about people and then hurt them but it's ok I'm sorry I think ive made some decisions thats what they seem like this is hard to say when you feel like dying or youre already dead okay so the sky is black and self-pity is out of fashion leave your guilt and pity at the other side of this place good luck with all your endeavors Regina Levy "...he lives in his heart, and its a mighty big place to live alone" Sling blade |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"Life isnt difficult its living that kills us everytime" This hit hard. It's way too true. *hugs* email me sometime, you pretty girl you. Us gorgeous Canadians need to stick together... okay now that I'm dong being a sap... Anyway, enjoyed the poem... if you need anyone to listen my email's Skyfire_18@hotmail.com |
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Avis Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 38Raleigh, NC, USA |
Wow, that's very deep. I'm hoping that my interpretation of this is wrong. I really do. I can't keep away guilt and pity though. It's just not what I do. Maybe it's wrong, but it's me. I'm sorry for everything that you're going through, whatever it is, and good luck to you in YOUR endevours, my friend. Feel free to e-mail me, even though you probably prefer a girl. lemonlover101@hotmail.com Peace and Love, |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
This was really good!! Quote _____________________________________________ "people would call this a cry for help my voice is already hoarse" _____________________________________________ This was my fav part! I loved the wording..It was really awesome.. *Allison* "Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back." |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
rhonda and allison got my first two favourite parts, but this is also.. quote: maybe it doesn't seem poetic, but all expressions don't have to be. your writtings always have how you feel in them, as this one does. and that's what i love about them. as always, a great write Regina. Keep posting, and i hope things work out with what this is about.. *hug* “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Like someone else said this was very deep, i could feel every word of it, and excellent write. thanx for sharing |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
...::speechless::.....GREAT JOB! i really like this work Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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