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ranita Junior Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 15 |
FREE FREE AS A BUTTERFLY GLIDDING SOFTLY IN THE SKY. FREE AS A DANDLELION SEED DRIFTING IN THE BREESE, THROUGH THE BUSHES AND THE TREES. FREE AS A DAISEY ON A HOT SUMMER DAY, FREE AS A DOG IN THE MEADOW OUT TO PLAY FREE AS A STAR TWINKLING IN THE SKY, FREE AS A LEAF IN THE STREAM FLOOTING BY. SOMETIMES I JUST WANT TO BE........... FREE |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Ranita, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! I wish for freedom to come to you and spread the wings of your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ranita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oooh, I hope this stems from your resolve you stated in the other poem I read, "More Than Friends." This is so light and powerful in its conviction to be free. It can happen, just wait and see. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Your on a roll...keep it up. One little nit though...and believe me I'M ONE TO TALK... you may want to fix your spelling of glideing (see what I mean about one to talk, I'm not even sure if that's spelled right, but haven't consulted my dictionary yet and wanted to get the post out..LOL) breeze (I'm sure about this one) and floating (ditto). Thanks for sharing. And welcome..if I neglected to say that yet.. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
ranita, welcome to passions and I love your poem is uplifting, I needed that today  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Nice topic,, I like it so much,, Keep writting ,,, Good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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ranita Junior Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 15 |
thankyou all for all your sweet wonderful words. i am a sorta new at writting. but i love pip and well be here reading and hopefully summiting too (smile) for a long time !! ps i know my spelling is bad lol always has been . i'll try to get it right if not well you all knew what i meant :-) love to you all and ty for your encourging words ranita |
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