Open Poetry #22 |
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Character |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda ![]() |
This is a short piece about my accident on the 29th of last month. It was and is an event that has placed my thoughts into life's realities and so now I attempt from here on, to build a better me. Hence, the title... "Character". The tides that creates life’s unforeseen ripe when tickled by the moon’s distant gesture of torridity foreseen by dusk. I’m left to the tired night’s loveless tongue and great God as my only true savior. Assaulted through and through with bane so wicked it’s unregistered by my swamped brain, as it creeps back to reality’s shouts. Being driven on tarmac blurred by pain, to a place where all surrounds me dressed in blood-stained whites. Hours, days, weeks, my life under construction, the project; character. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org [This message has been edited by haydenjames (08-15-2002 02:58 PM).] |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
A very vivid sense of atmosphere, powerful message and great visualisation.It's a wonder how this piece isn't flooded with responses. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
We are always under construction..but I think you started out with exceptional quality.. So glad you are with us. ![]() Sincerely, Reg |
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jvn New Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 1 |
Ik wens je heel veel success met je herstelling. Nu be je sterker dan ooit!!! Vanaf dit moment kan je alles aan. Ik wens ja die kracht van een leeuw en de hart van wijsheid. I hoop dat je der boven op zal komen.... Een kusje voor jouw mijn eiland schat.. met veels liefs bluebug.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello, our friend. I don't know anyone that can't stand a little improvement...I am glad you are feeling better and are back among your poetic friends...and I'm going to be looking forward to your new writings...Welcome Home! |
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