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Open Poetry #22

night vision

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-08-30 03:37 PM

I long for dark tranquility--
I draw the blinds to pretend.
I watch the hands of clock--tick-tock--
I long to be with you again.

I will wish my day away
should shadows prove a lover's keep--
the sun can shine another day--
I'll find another time to sleep.

You are the rest that repairs me--
night vision--startled clarity.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2002-08-30 04:11 PM

Not long, but volumes said, as ever you could. Very well done, gentle one...very gentle smile

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-08-30 04:14 PM

quick kiss for M'Lo!!!

have missed you lovie!

and alwas, it's getting to be "rush hour" but wasn't letting you get away without a kiss! Thank you, gentle one.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-08-30 04:16 PM

Karen...you do have a way with words...

Is tact your strong suit? Me thinks not..
Ms. blunt and to the point, as always and
as it should be...

Rainy days are made for...well, you know...

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-08-30 04:18 PM

"Is tact your strong suit? Me thinks not.."

BUSTED!!!

Thanks mag!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-08-30 10:40 PM

whew! it's been a long time since I felt that way before! good write and reminder.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-08-31 12:03 PM

The pause that refreshes. Yes!

Nice, Karenity

~Ed

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

7 posted 2002-08-31 12:47 PM

I turn the hands
of clock
to race

to opened door
the moon's
face

nightshine, Karen
as always
b

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-08-31 12:49 PM

(serenity enters...wearing not-so-stylish infrared...)

oh...I SEE YA!

chuckle..

thanks to all, with cuddles and gratitude.

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