Open Poetry #22 |
Romeo and Juliet got married. |
chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Hark! The voice of heavenly angels, And the cling clanging of celestial bells. And in the blue sky, as the stars dazzle, Romeo and Juliet emerge out of a castle. Both in their finery dressed, And by the heavens blessed, You’d have guessed what’s the occasion, Their eyes gleaming with passion, the greatest love pair of the world, Who died for each other we’were told! But here they are exchanging rings, As the stars dance and the moon sings. Hence Romeo and Juliet were married amidst the clouds, And their beaming faces manifested their joy knew no bounds. Oh Pardon me Shakespeare fans, For Imagination, there’s no bans. So, I just got a little bold, And thus the tragic tale was retold. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
This was cool. A what if? On Romeo and Juliet. Glad I found this. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so cool Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, I like this ending much better! Enjoyed! ~ smiles ~ Earth Angel |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx to u all for reading and replying. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Indeed... this is how it should have happened...and how it will for me eventually. Thank you. I think my Romeo would love to read this. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) The spirit of Shakespeare lives on in all our hearts and you speak of the powerful and tragic love so well in this wonderful verse, I love it, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx Siofra, for ur remarks. hope u and ur romeo enter into a wedlock. |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Thanx Noah, for ur kind words. |
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