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Open Poetry #22
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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
0 posted 2002-08-30 12:18 PM


I see you once had life
when I gaze into your eyes
others fear you
not I
I want to be like you
have felt you watching
heard your whispers
in my blood
swirling mind
full of you
spinning heart
longing for, what
show me
come to me
let me remind you
of what you long
life
© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2002-09-06 10:00 AM

I know someone like this...this is a piece full of courage and understanding...I like the way you reached out here
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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Texas
2 posted 2002-09-06 11:09 AM

Tempting piece! Very seductive.

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?
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