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Someone To Love
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Someone To Love |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SOMEONE TO LOVE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When the surf kisses you softly, and the wind blows through your hair, I can only look and stare in awe, at the fragile beauty which you bare… If I could, I would hold you this day, walk together gracefully in the sand, feel the warmth of a southern sun, guide you to passions soft dreamland… Perhaps dance with you until dawn, listening to sexy guitars, as they play those bluesy melodies through the night, as lips touch embracing, a rose bouquet… I’d whisper tender words in your ear, share with you my warmest embrace, open my soul to one so fair, if you desire, let you know I’d follow you anyplace… When I was young I dreamed about someone, someone to love into the early morning, to inspire them, perhaps have a romance, loving me in return, to douse the burning… ~~~~ |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
"Perhaps dance with you until dawn, listening to sexy guitars, as they play those bluesy melodies through the night, as lips touch embracing, a rose bouquet…" Heyyyyyyy Bill. Where ya been all my life ??  Sexy Guitars,Bluesy Music,Dancing,Rose Bouguets and now I know you like to fish! Wow..What woman could ask for more ???? You drew a lovely picture with this one. Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, if that isn't a love poem, I don't know what one is! It takes my breath away----literally! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
When the surf kisses you softly, and the wind blows through your hair, I can only look and stare in awe, at the fragile beauty which you bare… Romantically wonderful !! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem Bill!! Great lines!! Neeraja |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'When I was young I dreamed about someone, someone to love into the early morning, to inspire them, perhaps have a romance, loving me in return, to douse the burning…' This is so tenderly impressive~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh Bill, You have outdone yourself with this. It's a jewel that sparkles with sweet love. Simply lovely. Enjoyed very much.  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Kitty.....I can play the guitar....I have five of them....I can sing the blues too...and I can do everything he said here too...really.....(way to go Billy boy...ya gotta quit writing things like this and stealing my wimmen!!!! |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Well well well...Bill you are certainly a gifted writer, i won't be shocked if your real name's cupid or something.This was skillfully crafted work man!(not 2 mention great with the ladies )Keep It UP! As i'm sure you will. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this touched my heart so very deeply because I know this boyish feeling so much as I still yearn for my Joanna and making her mine! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am so happy you now have this joy of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
***BUMP***  (big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, I just had to bump this back up because this deeply touches my heart as I have missed my Joanna so so much and know these sweet sorrows of desires so well! (sigh) God Bless You, this is a gorgeous poem! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ranita Junior Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 15 |
bill i loved your poem ! soooo romantic ! keep them coming. ranita |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Hiy dear Bill... I love it too..So romantic poem from romantic person like you.. You know I wish I can learn how to play guitar,, I tried but I couldnt,,,I love it so much,, I wish that one day someone can play it for me...Oh,, Do you know how to play it?? Any way I really love your poem and I will be waiting to read more... Good luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Wowzas. This sounds to me to be quite the lucky woman.. long live rock and roll.. and yes.. it IS SEXY.. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, I admire how each line is so carefully crafted and emotionally charged. "Resistance is futile" say I. SimplyGold |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Perfect! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well Bill, if this doesn't bring that someone out of the woodwork, I don't know what will...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh I love those sexy guitars, Bill... and I agree with Karilea... It will bring her out of the woodwork. ~ hugs from the heartLyra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
as always enjoys your read |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tenderest whispers of love...how can words of romance not be heard?...helen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exceptionally well done as usual Bill. You're such a good romance writer! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Smokin! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Bill!! Over here!! I love the guitar, dancin till dawn... the wind in my hair...and I was bass fishing while away this past week. Sure did miss you and your romantic words.  ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill To be loved like this...a dream for many woman....along with being read poetry like this. Beautiful! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling heart this is exquisite writing, and the thoughts simply flow down the page here. YOU have to know I utterly utterly utterly love this. I don’t just have chills I think I have a temperature ………… brilliant this is one of your best darling heart. I love it I utterly utterly love it As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Perfect one for me and Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh so beautiful and romantic, Bill. A great poem to read and start off with for my day! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful words of love and romance here Bill. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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