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Open Poetry #22
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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
0 posted 2002-08-30 12:16 PM



Oh, but to breath
your breath
to feel your
hands caress
to once
drown in
pools of eyes
linger
then
contentment
in life's death
© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-08-30 12:52 PM

Zinsser - a most fulfilling way to meet the day...

BC
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-08-30 12:53 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2002-08-30 01:45 PM

Such a short breath there, Connie. Make it longer! Please?

Mike
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