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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-15 11:27 AM

I was thinking of you
when once again
I became breathless

memories of you
filled my being

and I felt
a love dart
so deadly
it pierced my heart

now my existence
is only sustained
each time
your heart beats.

Touch me with your whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-15-2002 01:56 PM).]

cjohnson/poet2079
Junior Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 35
va(757)

1 posted 2002-08-15 01:43 PM

"touching the heart with whispers of love"...
Very nice , Marge; sounds familiar~(smiles)

eyssence

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-08-15 01:45 PM

Anne, what a lovely love. Well done.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

3 posted 2002-08-15 01:53 PM

now my exsistance
is only sustained
each time
your heart beats.

my favorite lines. Aching and haunting.

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-08-15 03:53 PM

Oh, Anne, I loved this one
I really liked the way you tied your end up
====================================
now my existence
is only sustained
each time
your heart beats
====================================
Such wistful depending
there is an implied trust there

Lovely write!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-08-15 04:57 PM

Thank you all for your comments. *HuGs*

And especially thank you magicmystery. It was when I saw those last lines in your post that I realized I had really messed up the spelling of existence. ;-)

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-08-15 04:57 PM

simply beautiful!!!

Neeraja

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2002-08-15 04:59 PM

Thank you Neeraja

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-08-15 05:26 PM

WhiteRose
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-08-15 09:40 PM

Very lovely, Anne...
extremely romantic...

~ hugs from your friend from the forest

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-08-15 09:50 PM

(smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, you always write such magical romantic poetry, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2002-08-28 12:37 PM

WhiteRose-
So beautiful.
I enjoyed reading this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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