Open Poetry #22 |
Marriage to Michael |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I had the flu and stayed in bed Played fever dreams within my head I dreamt that Mike and I were wed "I do," my Michael Jackson said As I stood there in that place In a gown of ebon lace I looked close and saw a trace Of glue that held his chin in place I'd said, "I do" I don't know why Then Michael turned away to fly He held my hand then passed me by Turned to Bubbles who caught his eye At the altar standing there All my friends smiled with no care Those Canna lilies in my hair Gave off a whiff of grave despair When I awoke I was so wild For Michael J had not smiled He passed me by, so meek and mild I had his name but no love child Instead, a circus he did send We played the games of his pretend The carnival was at an end As was my dream of fever's send When I awoke I cried with woe Alas, alack I'll never know Would fever dreams that come and go Cause me next to marry Toe Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LOL... It could be worse Ms. "Jackson" dear You could be married to Balladeer, Bug sprays his hair and underarms, A cockroach has much better charm. It's true there's riches with either "Mike" And they both have the same complexion, But Toerag's better every other way, Just almost near perfection! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A delightful write. Left me laughing. Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKethry~ Left me rolling with laughter in the aisle~ Take two aspirin and call Doctor LOVE in the morning~ LOL ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I was laughing so hard..I wasn't sure what this was about..but it needs to be kept in front for others to read... what a great sense of humour you have and the talent to put it to use...I actually think you have bested Toe... M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Keth You cracked me up with this! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Keth, you're about 45 years too old for Michael Jackson and 45 years too young for Toerag. He needs them so weak and frail they can't run away. You did real good with this one!! I'm sure you could do wonders about that dream with Toe and I, for one, anxiously await it!! LOL! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Me thinks this was just too cute! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Breaking Bubbles dreams are funny blurry minutes of madness so do not wake me! so i may be less insane [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (08-29-2002 10:27 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
LOL!!! ROTFL!!! Awwwwwww, I'm sorry this was a dream with a sad ending, I too have half a mind in my dreams marrying a celebrity, both me and Joanna want to marry Shakira! LOL! (kiss on cheek) Aww, as for Toerag, we'll have to see if that's still legal! LOL! This is cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved heart sister and bringer of the dawn’s delight, YOU are right I love it. See what happens when you are fevered darling heart, Krissy is going to get you for sure. Far be it for me to give you advice darling heart but I would take to hiding when you hear her knocking on the door It was bad enough that you out did her with Promise when I said you were fevered and sick she said ‘oh thanks mum make me feel better why don’t you. I knew Keth was good, if she can write like this when she’s ill I’m giving up now’ This had me laughing my socks off, that is if I wore socks, which I don’t. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a wild dream and even wilder question, Keth... I am still roaring with laughter over this one... just tickled.... Hilarious, hysterical, hallucinations here.... ROTFL...... ~ big hugs and chattery chipmunk chuckles Lyra |
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Inuwindow Junior Member
since 2002-08-29
Posts 12 |
Wow, I never imagined, I'd find humourous poetry here, and especially one that would leave me ROTFLOL. Thanks for the giggle tonight. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... I enjoyed this very much, Kethry! *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - enjoyed reading this. It flows and love the story you have told... BC |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, a delightful read, sorry for the fever, but this one left behind a delightful burning sensation...oh wait. That very well could be Brian Site's gumbo I just enjoyed.... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
OMG I think I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. My eyes hurt.... Ya know what I meam? When I think of M.J. I think of Thriller.... and he is getting to look more like that without the makeup lately... YIKES!!! Well done, My dear. Love, Light, and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO!!!! This is perfect, passionate playful Pipster humor. What a way to start the day! |
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