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Pesky Critters! X 2
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Pesky Critters! X 2 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
those flies those flies their days are numbered three, that’s what I’m told in promised scientificry so why, oh, why, do they plague me so from morning’s rise until the night’s glow? ©August 29, 2002 I sat by the computer a fly came to tutor in languid repose he adjusted my prose tickled my toes skipped on my nose and tried to eat my meal. He stepped all around from my brow to my frown too much of a clown in black not in brown he’s come to this town with intent to touch-down and hamper my zeal. ©August 29, 2002 I think I'm going to scream, they crawl around in streams. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so cute, Virginia... Flies multiply like.... well, like flies... When we had a sailboat on Lake Michigan, they were so bad that they would sometimes cover the entire foredeck... and their bite is really sharp. It feels like getting stuck with a needle...  ~ hugs from a pesky chipmunkLyra |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Another poem that made me giggle. The worst thing that could happen on the road was for a fly to get in the truck. The darn thing would go from coast to coast with us! Loved this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My skin is crawlin'! Egads!--Must be good writing to evoke a physical response like this! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL Cold hands means a warm heart |
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