Open Poetry #22 |
Tell me why |
bakedangel New Member
since 2002-08-29
Posts 1st.louis metro area |
Why do I blame myself for something I could never change? Why do I continue to torture myself over what you have decided? Why cant I get you off my mind when I tell myself repeatedly to forget about you? Why cant I forget your smell? Why cant I forget the times you held me in your arms? Why cant I look at my hands and not think of all the times you have held them? Why cant I stop thinking of all the memory's and laughs we have had? Why cant I wake up tomorrow and be like Im over him and mean it? Why does this pain keep getting stronger with every breath I take? Why do I feel so empty inside? Why does my soul hurt? Why cant you think of me half as much as I think of you? Why don't you feel the hollow heart such as I have? Why do act like I was never even in your life? Why cant I say the right things to change your mind? Why cant you come back and heal all of this pain.......Why? Because you are with her..... Tell me what she has that I don't? Tell me you didn't mean to hold me in your arms so tight Tell me all your kisses were given with your eyes open Tell me you didn't mean to say I love you Tell me you didn't mean to say I looked gorgeous every day Tell me you lied about all the feelings you said you had felt Tell me that all the laughs and good times we have had were all fake Tell me I meant nothing to you....so I can move on... ~*~Regina~*~ |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
that was a beautiful piece.i know exactly how u feel... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-29-2002 01:29 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The eternal questions. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I thought this was very good also. Except i need to change the her to him and the she to he. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome. I like the poem. Love can be so hurtful, but it hurts so good |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Why? The eternal question of love and life. Nice debut. Sorry for your pain, but remember.. what does not kill us, makes us stronger. You have the strength, you will go on..hopefully to write more cool poetry around here in a wonderful circle of friends. Hello and Welcome. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And the answer is:....You need to take a deep breath and forget the idiot existed.......why?....see answers below: He's an idiot See above See above See above See above " " " " " " Ya need to find a Toerag!!!!...Good write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BakedAngel~ Welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Regina, this is such a powerfully heartwrenching debut, sweet friend, I know how love can hurt like this but just have the courage to go on for He always has a plan and true love will find your way, this is very sensitive and touching, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Regina, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Welcome to Piptalk. You've written what we have all asked at one time or another. It is pretty powerful when we see it on paper. Paul McCartney answered it best: "Let it be Let it be, whipered words of wisdom, Let it be" Looking forward to more of your writing. SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-31-2002 10:34 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to these passionate pages. Why is the eternal Q, and why not is sometimes an acceptable answer, though probably not in this case. Keep writing it out. I hope you will enjoy the comraderie at Pips. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
You know dear its the first time for me to feel my body tremble when I read your peom..I feel it the word from your heart,,,I really also feel you. Dont feel sad dear friend every thing will be allright I know how the love is so hard but wait and see what the days are hiding for you.. Very great peom.... Keep writting I will be waiting to read more... Welcome dear... Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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