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Sun Drops of Morning
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Sun Drops of Morning |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sun Drops of Morning I cannot see the morning for the sun much as the trees for forest at the dawn I cannot see the winning for the game much as the nimble for the lame I cannot say the words I have to say for the paragraphs of idiocy in the way What would the evening bring if it had a voice; would the powers that be reiterate a choice? Could nonsense be found in logic that’s presumed? And food found in the fodder that’s consumed? Could a mind that’s set aside for want of thought, presume the messages that a life has wrought? If there were thinkers that were sage, would there be something whimsical about the page? If Alice had found a wonderland in life would she have ended up a wizard’s wife? If crawdads could dance beside the stream would they have needed entrance to my dreams? If there were something I truly had to say, would I continue on in this array? The morning of this day is rising high as flies and sun drops flit about the sky. I sit and press the keys in nonsense phrase seeking for a thought or two to raise. Short circuits seem the nourishment at hand as sands in hourglass and minutes span. Oh, whisper words of innocence my friend the thoughts in cumulus defend, they drift about within the sea of blue that hovers over earth with naught to do, but let the sun drops of the morning seep into the hearts of those who rise from sleep. And should a treasure rise above the muck certainly we’d awaken rascal Puck. ©August 29, 2002 perhaps it should be "Sun Drops of Morning Madness"  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed this piece of poetic pondering. I too, have used the "if" word to provoke thought. Check out my "If Superman..." on page two. It's good for a laugh! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I think you might be right about the title change "Sundrops of Morning Madness"...LOL But poetic pondering always leads to some great stuff and this is no exception. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Madness is part of gladness, that is part of happiness, that is part of enjoy, which is what I did. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
If Alice had found a wonderland in life would she have ended up a wizard’s wife? If crawdads could dance beside the stream would they have needed entrance to my dreams? If there were something I truly had to say, would I continue on in this array? This was excellent. This was wonderful. This was a joy to read. |
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