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TWIN SOULS
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TWIN SOULS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Twin souls are we Ne'er long apart One soul, one mind One spirit heart I am me And you are too We are one Both me and you We are the whole The one and same Tho' you be wind --I, summer rain Our energies flow They merge, attune Tho' you be sun And I the moon You are my joy My soul's delight Tho' you be day And I the night A timeless coin --Two sides are we Spinning through space For eternity Let's make a pact That next time 'round We'll claim the passion Now lost, then found We will return From whence we came Our distant home God's Light domain Twin souls are we Ne'er long apart One soul, one mind One spirit heart |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
impeccable rhythm save for two consecutive stanzas near the end...I like the comfort of the rhythm, it fits the message well Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Love it!!Twin souls...guess I'll have to post my "Lovers" poem now...I have been inspired!! peace.love.light and happiness Tammy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS thank you for your comment on the rhythm of my poem. It is something I strive for in my writing. Tammy, it pleases me greatly that this poem has inspired you to post a love poem of your own. I enjoy reading both of your postings and will be looking for more of them. LLL L |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"We will return From whence we came Our distant home God's Light domain Twin souls are we Ne'er long apart One soul, one mind One spirit heart"   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, and may true love always fill both your hearts as one! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah and Loner, yes it is a beautiful experience when you reconnect with a part of your soul in this lifetime. LLL L |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This was just a sweet post, Makes me think about my husband (mystic mystron) and I. There are some here that already know the story... in a nutshell, we were each other's first and took us 13 years to find each other again... and get married. Enchantress knows the best as does alterego. We are the piece of each other that completes the puzzle of US. Loved it!!! Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sherry, that truly is a love story you just shared with me! I guess "13" can be a lucky number afterall! P.S. I was just thinking about this poem and voila---you just posted a reply and brought it back into the light of day! Thank you! ---psychic bond between us! Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is so soft and sweet and so..together  Enjoyed the flow and the lovely thought contained therein. Well done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WhiteRose---I liked your play on words---"and so--together". That was a very witty reply! Thank you dear rose of white! May your day be filled with joy! Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Linda! I once wrote something along these lines ... it is a fertile subject, indeed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Interloper---please go search for the one you wrote! I'd love to read it!---and yes, it certainly is a "fertile" subject! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Earth Angel, this simply put, is lovely. I feel this way as well about my hubby and myself.....even though sceptics shake their heads in doubt. Let them. We know better  .This is going into my library. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Ah yes! Nice rythm! One word for this one.......unity. Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nightshade--I am so happy for you and your husband. It truly is a gift! It also pleases me that you and I are of the same mind on this subject. My New Age friends (whom I absolutely adore!) gave me the name of Earth Angel because I have my head above the clouds but my feet are planted firmly on the ground. At times I feel I'm more of an earthy angel---I do have a bit of a naughty sense of humour! teehee Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Krishankins---You've said so much with one word "unity". That is a beautiful word and that was a beautiful reply. Thank you! Linda |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Linda,this is beautiful. You placed it together in such a nice, flowing way. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sandra---Thank you for saying so! I appreciate it. This poem is special to me. Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Linda, You are fast becoming one of my favorites. You just do this so well. So beautiful... Mikey |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mikey---as you, are mine! Thank you! Have a great day! Lindy Lou |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is beautifully constructed and your message comes through so very loud and clear, Linda... Isn't it wonderful when you know that you have met your soulmate... I think you recognize each other instantly... Thats what happened to my husband and me.  ~ hugs for an Earth AngelLyra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lyra---what a warm and kind response. Thank you! Fortunate are we, who experience that kind of love---even once in this lifetime. Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Linda, I can see why this is one of yr favs. So, you get, one more bump from me. Mikey |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Linda Love can be like this...what a beautiful metaphor you have given it. Much enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie---Ah, yes, love can be like that--and I wish it for everyone! Your kind reply is much appreciated. Linda |
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