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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The ocean minimizes everything but itself even days of wanting all plans humbled it’s been a long time since I’ve seen the ocean would ya take a day trip with me we’ll put the top down you can pick the soundtrack doesn't matter much to me who drives |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Doesn't much matter to me if the top is up or down, but I get to drive, ok? I miss the beach! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I'm ready...what time you picking me up??? you're going to have to drive pretty fast if it's only going to be a day trip!!!  Though, I must say, of all the places I've seen the ocean, the neatest was England where the tide goes out about half a mile. You can never win or lose |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The ocean minimizes everything but itself even days of wanting ================================ God how I hope so ..... *smiling at you for this* I'll send you a post card if you send me one  (TY) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It sounds good to me, Duncan... but hurry up, summer is almost over... although in autumn...the ocean has it's own beauty.  ~ hugs from a chipmunk yearning for the oceanLyra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't forget the sunscreen. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As Robert Deniro once asked, "Are you talking to me?!? Are you talking to me?!?" --If you are, you're on! Sounds like a plan! ---I'll bring my Beethoven CD! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Nothing better then a drive and a sea breeze. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Yes, Duncan let her be in control, we love that. I hope you enjoy the trip, but like you said the ocean is vast so just beware  Loved the poem reads like a song! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ This is WONDERFUL ! Can we stop and build sandcastles ?  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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