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A Great Big Sky
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A Great Big Sky |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As far as the endless forever Shades of blue and of gray by the weather To blush pinkened cheeks upon sunset On bold in gold rise with the morn met Reflection of sea green deep water Covered white in the frock winter brought her Puckered up in the storms ill sent temper Or to mute as fogged glass the pre-empter As far floats the ivory of dreamers Shades sheer in confetti and streamers To befall the charms changing each season Or exclaim toasts to life for no reason Rippled clouds skirt horizons in frilling As the mind wanders unbound and willing Patterned backdrop of every dream freely As far as forever is really Copyright Kkh 8/28/02 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen I love the descriptions within. I was going to tell you my favorites (the confetti and streamers and the rippled clouds...frilling) I really liked that one.  M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodness girl, this could be a time of all seasons, shades, shines, and shimmers.. Excellent images and how you tied them in.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Kathleen, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may the skies always shine sunshine upon your heart, Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
As far floats the ivory of dreamers Shades sheer in confetti and streamers To befall the charms changing each season Or exclaim toasts to life for no reason Lovely write!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I read your profile, I discovered that you work in a highly technical left-brained industry. This poem proves that your right brain is functioning superbly as well! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Rippled clouds skirt horizons in frilling.... This is so very creative, Kathy... a marvelous write... It reminds me of the old Beatles song, "Lucy In the Sky With Diamonds" remember the "marshmallow people and marmalade skies" I'm not sure I got the words right, but your poem reminds me of that kind of fantasy.  ~ hugs of fantasyLyra |
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