Open Poetry #22 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
night was a bice slice of 114 to Dallas front wheel throwin'up spray gray rain a hundred mutts peeing in a fireplug wind water blood bounced off the speedo's glasses like a go fast pro banging wipeout hymms after hours at babydolls on k mart skins I slid my ski under an over pass garage "first come first swerve" beside the newish jag white girl & wood with night blue tin unzipped my jacket and hung it over the bars sleeves hung down like two black hoses doing the dribble drool before the shakin' "why don't you get in?" she cooed vulgar a first time CD to a virgin with eight tracks as she opened the passenger of "maybe you win" I stepped in sheathish and sat back, blank mind in the leather glove of instant explored pores my imagination's body coated in dollar sign sin "nice ride!" I offered as my eyes slid around those curves like a sports car at a road ralley "thank you" she replied while adjusting her trim to impress with the sillycones and a sharen stone move with legs and, "lots of tattoos."she hisspered while tiptoeing fingernails and diamond gems up my forearm to a puddle of ink that was still high on my shoulder "nice nails," I countered comparing them in my mind to the length of her hem and how to get over the scars of morning afters ...she read my mind like a glossy eyed cat "you ought to see what I can do with them" "bowl?" I kidded licked,my humor was quick, almost made her blink at it's slither but it slid off the polished texture of her perfect whim "I like to play with living toys" she growled, as her fingers ripped rain spots from my beard "why don't you take me, she tasked, out for a spin?" "the lady is solo" was my replied lie "then you ought to sell it, I could buy you one that we could both play on" she ordered with a grin her voice was the sound of a siren and lights coming too fast behind when your packin colts and a kilo, and ridin blind man stoned at 2am I opened the door and stepped out hurry tall looking back at the puddle I left in the seat and at her thigh highs and the number she penned on the back of a twenty with the scent of 'my sin' ©Dark(road stuff) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-15-2002 08:56 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love your road trips, we get to hear such great stories. So you had that lil black scoot out again.......darn......didn't hear her in the drive, musta been deep in sleep. Hey, next time make sure you wake me up darn it!! *pouts* Lol......thanks for the morning smiles and images Ds. Now......back to this cup of java.... somebody tell me, please help me.... understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins) {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-15-2002 12:51 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Donna... was a few grays ago .... just something mothed back to the light of thought thanks babe for your reads and herez a hug to ya. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DS, I'd say you remembered more then most when you woke up. Enjoyed |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Enjoyed the show Dark Stranger. Cool dreaming. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Heck of a shower, here... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy sir...thanks guy, I appreciate the review. sigheyes, thanks to you for the check out....just one of them scooter shoots. sunshine, good morning sweet lady with coffee and smile. yes a bit of the ol' dallas drench there, sure don't miss those lake makers. Thanks for the read babe. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Dark~ Enjoyed the morning ride... ~slow hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You read like a biker mag on shakespearean steroids..Which of course..is very appealing to the inner wild child word goddess within me..Absolutely love this. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress, thanks for the hugs and the smile lady E. regina, now that was a mouthful, thannnnks for the kita ms kitty. will do more shakeysmear for ya soon. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
on the back of a twenty with the scent of 'my sin''' what a treasure you really are.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, DS An amazing poem! The scenes technocolor, with stereophonics. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lauren, humble huggies and a handfull of thanks to you babe. ms martie, thanks for lookin in on this one, I know pure romance huh? (grin) was a true story though...from what I rememmber. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, that's funny, my depiction of you is almost just like what Martie said, you're like half-Shakespeare and half Robert M. Pirsig! (big hugggssssss) This is very deep and provocative writing as always, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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