Open Poetry #22 |
The Man Who I Adore |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I stand right here before you The man who I adore You've filled my heart with love I've never felt like this before You love me so completely How I savour every day These times I'll always cherish As you take my breath away How I thrive when in your radius My spirit soaring high above I bloom just like a flower In the garden of your love This day is now a memory And tomorrow is far from view So I'll escape inside my dreams And fill my mind with thoughts of you I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous poems of love always touch my heart because I feel the same way for Joanna and dream of being in her radius and holding her hand happily! (kiss on cheek) May love always be beside you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful imagery Stunning in thought. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Some beautiful images here, Sue... You sure sound happy... ~ hugs and smiles Lyra |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Lovely and romantic! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"This day is now a memory And tomorrow is far from view So I'll escape inside my dreams And fill my mind with thoughts of you" That is a great escape! Thanks for sharing. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - this is a wonderful love poem - romance drips from the page as I read - loved it - Paul |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Sue, enjoyed this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, the power of love! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Suetang, The picture is a study in negative space, but the poem fills it with a warm glow. Mikey |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very good combo here Sue....doing the tango and the waltz.....with a stunning pic to match the words... |
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