Open Poetry #22 |
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frail little secret.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
I stare Out into vast space Conjuring up The expression on your face Once I blurted Out that deep within I hold a valuable secret One I hold so dear One I doubt you shall ever hear My body sighs My mind cries Struggling to compose myself As my soul is dangling On this shelf High above the rest of the world Afraid to fall But I'm so dangerously close Each time I speak to you Each time I look at you Each time I dream of you And each time I cry out for you Damn my frail little secret... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Damn my frail little secret... We all have them. Nicely put. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the way this was put Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sometimes you just have to lock those secrets into a straitjacket and throw away the key... otherwise, they keep trying to come out... Beautifully written, Kristin... ![]() Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Yes, sometimes we just have to lock those secrets in, but those that ache us to be shared have to be released carefully! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice, nice write. Liked that little bit of "desperate" that I saw in it. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wistful. I, as well as many of your readers, can identify with feelings such as these that you have so eloquently expressed |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Kris..i totally identify.Well put! |
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