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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-08-27 03:15 PM

Emotion Less

I've been laying down my thoughts
arranging what to say
covered quiltings, past of words
much in disarray.

Erasing all the hurts,
expunging, wiping out,
a life that themes of never dreams
filled with always doubts.

So here I lay down tears
that mist so drunk with I
secret thoughts that empty out
emotions wondering why...

or

Tears that say nothing
Of never dreams, always doubts
Thoughts in disarray

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-08-27 03:51 PM

Tears that say nothing
Of never dreams, always doubts
Thoughts in disarray

Very heartfelt write. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-27 03:55 PM

Maureen,
It's time you laid the sad away and looked for some joy.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-08-27 04:05 PM

Chris..thank you
for reading

Sy, well what can I say...I wake up happy every day...then the sad approaches from behind...always aiming for me no matter how hard I try to get away ...thank you

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-08-28 09:32 PM

A very heartfelt poem this is. I know how this feels.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-08-29 02:50 PM

M, I must tell you that you always write
very beautifully....no matter the mood or
feel....without exceptions....

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-29 03:36 PM

you do turn phrases as the masters

good stuff, these and the phrases that you pen in each are exquisite and mind-capturing

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-08-29 04:57 PM

once again...yes

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-08-29 09:38 PM

Yes, sometimes the sad does tend to follow us around, doesn't it? Nicely penned, as always.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-08-29 09:41 PM

Hello Maureen. I know about the sad. The happy comes and goes. Sad sticks around in the corner waiting to pounce. Enjoyed the poem.

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