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You are the Sun
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You are the Sun |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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You are the Sun You’re the sun about to shine a golden beam into my eye You’re the music of a meadow lark the breeze will carry by You’re horizon’s edge awaiting for the sunset to appear You are child’s lips so sweetly poised to utter something dear You are life’s soft expectation of the warmth of springtime days You’re a petal waiting to unfold in gentle dawning rays You are nectar sweet and succulent the sun will soon expose I’m a bumble bee that’s clinging to the petal of a rose Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (08-27-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply lovely. Enjoyed  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness!! How soft and lovely!! Library bound it is. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Beautiful as always!! You have such a way with words! What else can I say??!! BRAVO!! ENCORE...ENCORE... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Excellent, you never let me down. Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dear Liz...a bee? You?? No, you are a butterfly that soars on graceful wings awaiting the perfect place to land |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hey Ruth, a busy bee to boot! Ask her, she has a new mop and she is so excited, doesn't take much to cheer her up does it? LOL. Liz, beautiful as always, love ya - did your parcel arrive yet? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very beautifully and calming, Liz...  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I feel at rest. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Geesch....I never hear from my dear Lizzie anymore...don't even respond to my artistic "garbage" anymore?.....Hope you're doing well gal.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is absolutely lovely Elizabeth Maree |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Elizabeth... It's beautiful. *S* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WhiteRose, THank you so much Chris, Your comments are very kind Vandana, THank you, my friend Tammy, Yoour enthusiasm warms my heart. TYank you, dear for such generous remarks Your sunshine rays unfild the petals of inspiration Sy, and you, dear poet , never let anyone down Hoot, Thank you, dear, missing you Sharon, mops are important, If you have one you like, you're more likely to wash the floor. Thank you dear for making me laugh and for your sweet remarks Lyra, your words mean so much, thank you The LOner, Glad you liked this poem, Thanks, Toerag, (look for an e-mail) Dark Angel, Thank you dear Suthrn, Your trip meant more than you will ever know. Your comfort was so needed and gave so much joy to a dear friend' Thanks for reading, dear Liz |
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