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A Simple Prayre (R.I.P Paul)
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A Simple Prayre (R.I.P Paul) |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
( bad news occurd this week and has left me in sorrow, i hope this explains it, I tryed to make it in sort of a song teknique rather then a poem) I remember all the way three years ago, jr high was the next destination to go we meet and became close tight friends to the end throught all the pain, tears all the twists and bends through all the grils and family issues that seemed to go wrong we forever stayed tight, but not for too long i wished that we could still go crusin and havin good times but seems it cant happen my heart has brusin,now im bustin out rhyms. so young seventeen, youve seen what ive seen all the broken hearts, lost freinds and kids on the edge but to not end up like these kids was our final pledge we swore neever to lash out at the end of our leash listening to his ways in our own way we would preach, with one loss there is much strength in a key and now with you gone ive found a way in me. Nothing had to happen we could still be rollin' but now in the graveyard i find myself strollin bend and knee at a stone marked paul i couldnt help my tears i just start to baul. why could one stupid person actually load that clip, come by in a full car and sail that ship questions that not the greatest minds can achive so many unknown questions that we all leave in god the answers i try to find, trying to leave this whole tradigy behind. my minture corss i find hangin round my face breakin down cryin trying to fake a loose shoe lace clenched in my grip, why you who was kicked so many questions and all with no end its jaded so many time this week my faith in man has faded strength i find in all others in my crew and now i write for so long in memory of you. R.I.P Paul You shal be missed! The man of few words... |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Oh...I am so sorry for your loss!! Don't worry about your form or typos or anything in this peice. I think we will all take it for what it is...a beautiful benediction. I wish there was more that I could say, but "I'm sorry" only goes so far and I'm sure you've heard it enough. Keep writing, I know it always helps me in my times of need. And above all, Keep the Faith!! Peace, Love, and Happiness Tammy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
TriXter, Such a painful and unnecessary loss. You have written your grief and pain well. You're loss will never go away and the pain only lessens with time as it doesn't go away completely either. Courage and peace to you at this difficult time.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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