Open Poetry #22 |
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Once Upon A Time (Celebrating Joanna's 1st Anniversary at Passions) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Our dearest Joanna has been at Passions for 1 year now, Yay!!! This is for you, my love, who makes me feel so special everyday and believe in the power of love! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Once Upon A Time By: Noah Eaton 8/26/02 Once upon a time I was lonely and in despair I felt love could never find my way Marauded by fates solitaire Then last October I smelled your loves sweet rose In swear you're truly an angel Falling to my arms in destinies cove It feels just like a miracle How God pit you into my world And though we're miles apart You always feel so close to me I can almost feel your kiss everyday... Once upon a time You took my hand and showed me the way At first I was nervous and scared I would fail you But now your arms is the one place I want to stay Many nights I cry thanking God you found me Just staring at your sweet pictures, I feel sweet serendipity At Cindrella's Castle I certainly wished upon a star Wishing for you and me to join in loves matrimony... It feels just like a miracle How God pit you into my world And though we're miles apart You always feel so close to me I can almost feel your kiss everyday... When you're gone I cry most of the time Imagining you looking out your window in bed Wondering if you think of me when the stars shine I think of a future we can share Hand in hand, two hearts as one I only want to be with you You're that special woman I want to love... It feels just like a miracle How God pit you into my world And though we're miles apart You always feel so close to me I can almost feel your kiss everyday... I want to be your sweetheart forever... I want to be your man forever... I want to be your sun and your moon I want to hold your hand forever... Joanna, I love you... ![]() "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-26-2002 07:37 PM).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So sweet and lovely, congratualtions, Joanna and to you of course ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope it happens just that way,too. Noah, if any man deserves his love dreams to be fulfilled, it is you. Beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - a loving poem for Joanna on her One Year Anniversary in Passions. Well done & Congrats Joanna!!! Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - love has grabbed you, it is certain. Lovely romantic write... BC |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
heh, Noah you little dog you! haha i must say even with lifes tradigys at my side, this poem brightend my heart even if it was just for a moment or two... Enjoyed The man of few words... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
yay, way to go both of you!!! ![]() |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sweet Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Noah, my good Buddy, you will have to forgive me. My computer uuurped right during your reply to this poem. Dulcy and i have been putting it thru surgery just to get it going again. (bad DLL file...arrrg *s*) But what i said, i think, was: Wishing you eternity in love with Joanna and mannnnn is she pretty! You both have the look of innocence and right-spirits. She will absolutely love this, Noah-Dude! ~owe ya a call soon, K?~ poetry from YOUR heart is more precious than any jewel jeff |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Noah- Very sweet write for Joanna. ![]() Joanna...congratulations on your anniversary! ![]() Hugs to you both, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Awwwww how very romantic and sweet... Congrats to Joaana and hugs and best wishes to you both ![]() Cher Poetry is: |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Great sentiment, full of heart and feeling, |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Futhermore, congrats to you both. I sincerly hope it works out for you both. And if not you can always hang out with me and the others in the Dark Forum! 'emitting evil laugh' Just kidding Nice Work |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Noah, this is a lovely love poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, you spread so much joy with your wonderful and encouraging comments to our poems. By the number of warm responses you have received so quickly after posting this poem, you know how much you yourself is loved. What a beautiful tribute to your beautiful Joanna. Even when you're miles apart, your love for her fills your heart. Ahh, love! Isn't it grand? Blessings to you both! Love, Light & Laughter |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah... congratulations to Joanna and also to you for writing this lovely tribute to her anniversary here... Your love for her shines through every line... ![]() Lyra |
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